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I didn't do much today, except for some grocery shopping and, erm... *blushes* writing.
Well, I made some excellent grilled veggie salad for dinner, that probably counts as activity.

A plot bunny got me this morning, when I was cleaning out ze boyz'  toilet. Unfortunately this activity is as inevitable as showering, so it seems that I won't be able to protect myself from plot bunnies.

It's going to be a thoroughly silly and humorous piece, which has only become possible because Death agreed to be borrowed from Terry Pratchett, for a brief appearance at the beginning and (probably) end. The title is 'Till Death Do Us Join'. Here's a small piece, which hopefully you're going to enjoy:

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The last brain child for some time, or so I hope. Although writing this one was already much less obsessive, so that's ok. I think I like this incarnation of Hermione best, but the readers may have a very different opinion.

So, without further ado, here's 

Lumione

Mar. 27th, 2007 10:01 am
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Don't expect anything like deep theoretical analysis, that's really not my thing. I'm a writer, and although I do write on a very conscious level, literary theory certainly isn't my forte.

But the fact that I've written 2 Lumione fics in a very short time, and am now giving birth to a third, got me thinking.

What makes me write 3 fics with the same protagonists? Their names and certain character traits are of course the same, but Hermione is a very different person in Universal Gravitation, Pureblood Courtship and the as of yet untitled fic. The difference is especially notable in no.s 2 and 3 (as you will soon be able to see for yourselves). In P.C. she is of course still very young, whereas in Untitled she's about 26 and in U.G. she's 23. So I can't be sure whether P.C. Hermione might not eventually become like her older selves in the other two fics.

It's more obvious with Lucius, whose age varies between about 50 and 57 in the three stories. At that age - whether wizard or Muggle - people's characters are more or less settled. And still, the three Luciuses are quite different.

Now there are, as I said before, certain fundamental character traits I would never change. Those do, of course, vary from author to author. I, e.g., could never write a completely dark, sadisitic, torturing Lucius coming together with victim!Hermione. Impossible, it just doesn't work that way for me. I see Lucius as a man who in his youth was very similar to Draco as described in the books: snotty, arrogant, way too sure of himself without being self-assured, a young man with a powerful father whose shadow is both burden and hiding place. He probably joined Voldie while still at that age and stage, found out later that he'd bitten off far more than he could chew, and was very glad indeed when the Dark Lord kicked the bucket. Or so he thought. In my personal view, Lucius is very much a family man - those who've read Sybil's Oracle will know that. The family is holy, he is the patriarch, and woe on whomever dares touch his nearest and dearest.  I think he was less than happy when Voldie returned. Going to Azkaban might have stoked his hate of the wizarding society as it is and brought him closer to Voldie, but then his Master made the big mistake of touching his son. That's when all bonds were severed, once and for all. 

This is my fundament, on which all three Lucius characters are built. The rest is more or less variable.

Same for Hermione: She's clever, she's bossy, she's fiercely protective of those she loves. I don't see her as a teacher, e.g., because she doesn't have much patience with the less gifted. She's also devious and, if need be, totally devoid of scruples (Umbridge). These traits may appear a bit stronger or weaker, according to age and experience, but that's my fundamental Hermione.

The real fun, however, seems to be in trying how many different buildings I can construct on the very same fundament. Buildings that won't crumble, that is. 

Funny enough, the character differences between Lucius in P.C. and Lucius in U.G. only emerged while I was writing. P.C. for example had originally been planned as a story around, not leading up to, the 'Vile rapist!' scene. There was meant to be a bit of conflict, Molly and Fleur hadn't been part of the original planning. But then Lucius decided to be playful, and Hermione wanted to be young and refreshingly bossy, and the two Kneazles wanted to form a counterpoint to all the action going on between their humans.

The Muse suddenly appeared in U.G., because, very much like Shiv, I hate Author's Notes giving long-winded explanations to the reader but felt that there had to be something in addition to the storyline. I wanted a harsher Lucius for U.G., but he turned out to be surprsingly soft. (Ahem.) 

What I'd be really interested in finding out - and hopefully some day I will - is how things would be if I wrote my own original fiction. Different, I guess. Because there wouldn't be various possible biographies for my protatgonists (as is the case in HP fan fiction), but only one I would have to work out for them, which as good as excludes tinkering with their characters further into the story.  Take one of my all-time favourite characters, Lord Peter Wimsey. He is a very fleshed-out character, with a rather detailed biography.  Had D.L. Sayers wanted to change him, she would have had to do so by some Deus-ex-Machina manoeuvre, which in itself wouldn't be very believable. Or send him off to two years of psychoanalysis, in order that he may get over his shell shock trauma. But then he wouldn't be himself anymore, which kind of bars that avenue. And, given his detailed biography and characterization, there is almost no room for making him react differently in similar situations.

And, to tell the truth, I suspect that the offer of ready-made but not very fleshed-out characters, together with a ready-made universe you don't have to invent, research and describe, might be one of the main reasons why I'm writing fan fiction and not original fiction.

Not that this fact makes me wish for JKR to kill off Lucius, Snape or Hermione, mind you!

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The good thing is, the fics are getting shorter. So you might have to brace yourselves for another ficlet, really short, and then maybe a haiku, and that ought to be the end of it. I do hope it will be, because I'm not sure if I'll survive another weekend of irrestible inspiration. My bum hurts, and my eyes hurt. The symptoms of martyrdom, I assure you.

Besides, fluffy Lucius/Hermione really isn't on. But, as I told Shiv this morning, you just don't have a choice if your brain supplies you with the completely unbidden image of... well, you'll see. It's the last scene. Personally, I think Lucius really is more of a cat person, or in this particular story, a Kneazle person. All that preening and coat-cleaning is very Lucius.

Prepare yourselves for fluff, humor and a hint of lemon.

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...that one Susanna, aka pigwidgeon37, has been struck by sudden and unexpected madness brought about by the wicked and violent attack of a rabid plot bunny this morning, at about 9 am, while aforementioned Susanna was taking a shower. Aforementioned plot bunny approached the bathtub with harmful intent, whilst its unsuspecting victim was washing her hair, and sunk its teeth into her ankle in a premeditated act of unprovoked violence.

OMG. It came totally out of the blue. I was unprepared and defenceless. So I spent the first part of the afternoon sitting in the sun on the baldony, together with ze boyz, furiously making notes, and the rest of the afternoon typing .

Untitled as of yet, and unedited, but here's the beginning.

Woe is me, because I stayed up until 2.30 last night, randomly killing botles of wine with Gabriele, and I'm afraid I won't be able to go to bed early tonight, becaus I simply *have* to write a bit more...

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Since Shiv so magnanimously invited me, I am now the happy owner of an SSHG exchange prompt, and quite happy with it. Well, let's be honest: I'm once again obsessed with writing, but I suppose that things will get back to normal with time.

The prompt, as I already said in another post, is very, very unspecific, something like "Severus meets Hermione --> smut". Of course open prompts are much easier to write,  and I'm extremely grateful for being able to write without any constrictions.

But. The problem here isn't authorial freedom, it's smut. English is not my first language, so maybe I'm wrong here, but I feel that 'lemons' and 'smut' aren't quite the same. A story containing lemons may contain smut, but 'lemon' is the somewhat larger category, including lighter, even more humorous stuff. As I interpret it, smut is all about shafts and pearls and canals and - well, more the (even though quite metaphorically described) mechanics of sex. Now, if I write sex scenes - and I quite enjoy writing them - I don't really want to give a slightly longer version of tab a and slot b. I like describing the tension, the feelings of the participants (both physical and emotional), I like writing pillow conversations. Throbbing shafts and moist pearls... I don't know. Writing about the mechanics of sex can be real fun, in my opinion, if one does it in a humorous way. Honestly, the squelching noises made by two sweaty bodies can be very entertaining - I suppose all those who don't wear full body condoms for sex  (and what kind of noises they'd make...) have experienced this at times. But smut, as I understand the word, is just plain boring. Mainly because sex usually ends up with something being stuck in some orifice or other, and that's not very entertaining in and of itself. What makes it funny, or touching, or titillating, is all that happens before and after and while assorted tabs are being inserted into assorted slots.

I do hope the person I'm writing my story for (and it's 45 pages already, so there won't be any drastic rewrites, oh no!) doesn't interpret 'smut' as I do, because if she does she might be quite disappointed. 

In other news, life is pretty good at the moment. Third kick-boxing lesson yesterday, and I'm so glad I'm not a male dog (being a bitch does have its advantages...), because I couldn't lift my right leg to pee. But I'm still enthusiastic about it, and if the muscles hurt, at least you know you really did some work.

I'll leave the embassy half an hour early (there isnt much work at the moment, I'm even able to write at the office), so I can stay with Gabriele's (friend and apprentice consul) cats for a bit longer without getting home too late. No plans for tonight, so I imagine the story is going to sprout another five pages or so.

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Except that I have to get used to the notebook's keyboard. I use it mostly for surfing the internet, and haven't done much writing on it.  
But having received the SSHG prompt last night, I just coldn't resist starting immediately, and I did some more today. I've got 16 pages so far, and although they'll need some rewriting I'm basically quite happy with the result. Not so sure if the recipient is goinng to like what he or she gets, but then the prompt wasn't very specific. And as Shiv said in her entry, it's not as if the recipient had any right to complain. That's the nature of the gift horse.

My friend and apprentice consul went to Vienna today, so I went out for a short evening walk to say hello to her cats. Our flats are at about 10 minutes' walking distance, so looking after each other's felines isn't much trouble. She's got a 7-year old boy and a 1 1/2-year old girl. Mal'chik (his name means 'boy' in Russian) is a beautifully silver-black patterned guy, and Sophie is a diminutive tabby with a squeaky soprano. I'd brought catnip drops to comfort them in their loneliness, and Mal'chik completely lost his habitual dignity, trying to get more drops than his somewhat shyer companion.

And now, let there be whisky and cashew nuts. And hopefully something nice on BBC prime.

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