After a very uneventful weekend
Sep. 15th, 2003 06:50 amI really didn't do a lot this weekend. Bit of writing, bit of reading. Did I mention that I went to see 'Veronica Guerin' on Saturday (with mother)? What a strangely unsatisfying film. And I still haven't worked out exactly why it left me with that feeling. Too Hollywood-sy for a documentary, too dry to be much of a movie. I mean, the story in itself is moving, yes, but it is told in a way that doesn't allow the spectator to get into the characters. For the whole duration of the film, I was constantly conscious of it being just that: a film. The distance remained. Is it the fault of the camera? The actors? The script? Or is it just that the personal history of one person, tragic as it may be, doesn't really get to me unless it's linked to much greater, much more tragic events? (Like e.g. The Pianist)
So today I'm going to acquire some Excel skills. Don't know when I'm ever going to need them, but at least I'll do something useful at the office, just this once (useful only for myself, but that's quite OK)
Orpheus has now 5 1/2 chapters.
ozratbag2's very insightful comment on ch.2 made me think about the way I'm handling the subplot. Originally, I intended to introduce it a bit later. Maybe I should have stuck with that idea. Then again, I had a very good reason for introducing it at this point. A subplot is such a wonderful means of quickening the main plot's pace without resorting to phrases like "The days and weeks passed quickly, and one day Hermione noticed with surprise that it was almost Christmas." Many authors do that, and I can't say I'm a big fan of this technique. Because it gives the reader the impression that the characters perceive time, i.e. also their lives, that way, that for them everything passes in a blur. Which certainly isn't the case, and so I thought it preferable to simply interrupt a rather slow-developing plot at some point, when it had been sufficiently established how the relationship progresses etc., introduce the subplot and thus jump a few weeks. Hm. I'll have to go over it again, just to make sure it really works.
And now a bit of cleaning (all for ze boyz, of course), shower and work.
So today I'm going to acquire some Excel skills. Don't know when I'm ever going to need them, but at least I'll do something useful at the office, just this once (useful only for myself, but that's quite OK)
Orpheus has now 5 1/2 chapters.
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And now a bit of cleaning (all for ze boyz, of course), shower and work.